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Honey, Forgive me
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Honey, Forgive me |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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My hand in my pocket As I walk along this road I caress this locket My emotions overflowed Angry at my heart I kick the gravel I walk upon Wondering where do I start How do I carry on I look all around me Everything's a blur Honey forgive me Your heart, I didn't mean to stir I've hurt you badly I know I can be a bitch But honey I was sadly Let me mend your heart Stitch by stitch I know I have hurt you With all that I've said But honey I missed you And wasn't using my head Was only listening To the beat of my heart For its winging and whining Was tearing me apart I hope you forgive me And understand this soul For the way I am I have only little control ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-17-99).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Dark Angel what a wonderful piece you've written. Heartfelt!!! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I understand soul-sib. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark angel, If he doesn't forgive you I will Wonderful poem. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-16-99).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Straight from your heart, Dark Angel. I loved it. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove, thank you so much -------------- Soul-Bro  Thank you ------------ You are so sweet Seymour, thank you ------------- Elizabeth,yeppers straight from the heart and thanks so much ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A lovely heartfelt piece, if he doesn't forgive you..he's crazy.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Isis, Thanks ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood! |
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