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Honey, Forgive me

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-16-99 10:05 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

My hand in my pocket
As I walk along this road
I caress this locket
My emotions overflowed
Angry at my heart
I kick the gravel I walk upon
Wondering where do I start
How do I carry on
I look all around me
Everything's a blur
Honey forgive me
Your heart,
I didn't mean to stir
I've hurt you badly
I know I can be a bitch
But honey I was sadly
Let me mend your heart
Stitch by stitch
I know I have hurt you
With all that I've said
But honey I missed you
And wasn't using my head
Was only listening
To the beat of my heart
For its winging and whining
Was tearing me apart
I hope you forgive me
And understand this soul
For the way I am
I have only little control


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-17-99).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 09-16-99 10:25 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Dark Angel what a wonderful piece you've written. Heartfelt!!!
DreamEvil
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2 posted 09-16-99 10:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I understand soul-sib.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvilŠ


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-16-99 02:05 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dark angel,
If he doesn't forgive you I will
Wonderful poem.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-16-99).]
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4 posted 09-16-99 02:35 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Straight from your heart, Dark Angel. I loved it.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Dark Angel
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5 posted 09-16-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, thank you so much

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Soul-Bro Thank you

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You are so sweet Seymour, thank you
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Elizabeth,yeppers straight from the heart and thanks so much


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Isis
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6 posted 09-16-99 06:21 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A lovely heartfelt piece, if he doesn't forgive you..he's crazy..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Dark Angel
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7 posted 09-16-99 11:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Isis, Thanks

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


passing shadows
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understood!
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