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Trynete
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since 1999-09-01
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Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 1999-09-16 09:50 AM


I recently went to New Hampshire with my boyfriend for a getaway weekend, and I wrote this poem about him while he was taking a nap. (By the way as you can tell I had a GREAT time!!!)

I smile as I think of tonight,
I smile because we will be making
love by candlelight.
I smile because you expect
so much more of me.
I smile whe I see
you sleep so peacefully.
I smile because you
have taken me under your wing.
I smile when you
call me honey.
I can't help but smile
when you are with me.
I smile because you are you
I smile because of the way
you do the things you do.
I smile when I lay my head
on your chest,
and I can hear your heartbeat.
I smile simply because you are
so sweet.


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Trinity

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-09-16 03:48 PM


Beautiful, Trynete-sounds like you're smiling quite a bit! What a sweet love poem. And by the way-WELCOME!!!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


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