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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It Starts With The crunch of gravel. The back and withdraw. The purr of the motor. The close of the door. The tone of the turn. The beam of the lights. The moan of the wind. The closure of night. The weight of boredom. The blues and the mews. The touching of sleep. The fight and refuse. The long way there. The length of the track. The humbling truth. With no way back. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh this is good. I can see the bags packed, the tears, everything. Very, very good. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you my dear. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"the humbling truth with no way back." Excellent! ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beki, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh shoot, Sy, this caught my eye again, so back to the top. I think this one likes me a lot. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
this pulled at my heartstrings Sy....another great one.... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine and pepper, I am amazed you dug this one up but appreciate the effort. It was one of my mood poems. Thank you both again. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another one I missed! Another great one!  ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, I can always count on you for a comment Thank you and *L*. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I never see you repost, but perhaps it's time you brought this up to 12? So many would relate..... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour what a find I got myself2nite... A fantastic write PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 REPOST! |
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