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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


0 posted 09-16-99 03:45 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

Like a cleansing rain
a sultry storm in summer bright
YOUYOUYOU
wash through my arid heart

The lonely moisture,
(my salty tears)
tossed about, driven away,
subsumed
by the passion
of my
newfound
-inspiration-

Hope...
I dimly recall such a term.
...and I attach it
to your name.
It purges the hatred,
forbears loneliness,
instills life
where existed-
...no breath of peace

Once,
I was
e m p t y
a desolate, souless void-
I am now,
possibly forever,
filled with the beauteous
...echoes
of only...


YOU



[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 09-16-99).]
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-16-99 04:08 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Budding romantic are we? Hmm?

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caroline
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2 posted 09-16-99 05:39 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

and blooming beautifully, I might add...love this one, Christopher!

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RainbowGirl
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3 posted 09-16-99 06:42 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Christopher:..Excellent..

HUGS

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poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 09-16-99 10:35 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Very very beautiful piece Christopher....you do have a bit of warmth in that heart of yours....(wink)

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Christopher
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5 posted 09-16-99 03:20 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

You see dream, I get in these moods... (much like a certain other person,) and can't help myself...

Thank you girls! a and a For you!
hoot_owl_rn
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Christopher....a very nice one indeed

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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