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DBeth
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0 posted 09-16-99 01:44 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for DBeth


As sorrow fills your eyes,
and emotions fan the flames.
I will not tell you lies,
of that nothing is gained.

I see your tears flow,
as pain shows in your smile.
The answers I don't know,
it will take a little while.

I know that you are scared,
and many things have brought you down.
Now you know I care,
Let's take away the frown.

I told you I would help you,
I'll try to help you mend.
This is all I know to do,
after all, you're my best friend.



(for Beth L.)


DBeth

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Justbleu
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1 posted 09-16-99 01:52 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That is sweet...it shows you care!! I hope all is good and well

Nice!!



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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

DBeth
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2 posted 09-16-99 01:57 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Thanks for asking.I'm o.k. I guess.My friend is having some real hard times right now.I'm kinda worried about her.

HUGS-----DBeth

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Isis
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3 posted 09-16-99 02:28 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Lovely...hope you friend is ok..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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4 posted 09-16-99 09:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very sweet!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Sunshine
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5 posted 09-16-99 10:12 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I know this was posted for your friend, but it fills other with much hope and love as well. Thank you for sharing.
DBeth
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6 posted 09-16-99 10:34 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Thank you all for the sweet replies.I am glad to know it helps others to relate.I just wish I knew what to tell my friend.She found out she has cancer and got evicted from her home the same day.I hate seeing her cry,and wish I could help to ease her pain.She is really down.I don't know what to do.
Anyways, thank you all again for the wonderful comments.Hugs to everyone!

DBeth

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caroline
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7 posted 09-16-99 10:48 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

DBeth...seeing the problems your friend is facing makes me realize how truly small my own problems are. My thoughts are with your friend, and with you, that you may comfort her as only a friend can.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
DBeth
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8 posted 09-16-99 10:55 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Caroline,Thank you for the kind words.It seems when we are down we can always look around and find someone worse off than we are.
I want to do more for her but I don't know what else to do.

Hugs to ya!
DBeth

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MissQ
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since 09-16-99
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9 posted 09-16-99 11:03 AM       View Profile for MissQ   Email MissQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MissQ

That was so beautiffully put....had to send it to my best friend !
DBeth
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providence,ky.42450


10 posted 09-16-99 11:20 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

I hope your friend likes it.Thank you for commenting.

Friendship doubles our joy,and divides our grief. Hugs DBeth

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