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TulipGirl48
Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 11
glendale, ca, usa

0 posted 1999-09-16 12:20 PM



We were the best of friends
Nothing nor no one could tear us apart
We laughed with each other
Cried with each other
We did everything together
Time has passed
And look at us now
What happened?
I don't understand
I try to reach out
But I can only catch air
I try so hard but yet I can't reach you
We're so close
Yet so far
Why did things have to change
We barely talk
No Hi's or Good-bye's
Just empty smiles
But what good is a smile if its not from within
Its something fake
Something that's meaningless
How did it come to this conclusion?
Was it me? Did I ignore you?
Was I too late in replying back?
Or was it you?
Did you just give up on our friendship?
You were a model to me
Someone that I can look up to
Someone that I can follow under their footsteps
I still look up to you, but now its from far away
I hope we return to the friendship we once had
Because I miss our late night chats
The laughs, the cries
And most of all just being with you.

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-WonderWoman

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Gesture
New Member
since 1999-09-14
Posts 7

1 posted 1999-09-16 12:35 PM


Wow...sad yet a very powerful cry for a friendship that's hard to find...I like it cuz..

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-Gesture

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-16 12:52 PM


Nice!! I hope the friendship works out!!

Thank You!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


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