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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-15-99 11:45 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

So strange

It's something here inside to blame,
That makes me act like moth to flame.
An essence that was born within,
That plays me like a violin.

Present me with the feminine
And something happens here within.
My personality changes,
It completely rearranges.

I vibrate from hard to mellow,
Like a sweet stroke on a cello.
Smile and soften my attitude,
Beyond my normal latitude.

Like something turns a key inside.
Something that seems to touch my pride.
Do things I'd not normally do.
It seems to me I actually coo.

Of course this attitude can change,
It's that, that seems to me so strange?
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Severn
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1 posted 09-16-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Another goodie - love that line: 'Like a sweet stroke on a cello'. Great work, Seymour.
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Quite interesting!!! Enjoyable read!!

Thanks



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Seymour Tabin
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Severn and Justbleu,
Thank you for the read and comments always enjoy what you have to say.
Toerag
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I wonder if it's the perfume?....Great great job Mr. Tabin.....wonderfully done!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-16-99 11:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Toerag,
I don't think it's the perfume but your close.
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6 posted 09-16-99 11:17 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sy, this one is a keeper. Well done.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 09-17-99 01:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer,
Thank you much for the comment.
I'll take your advice and keep it.
Julie
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8 posted 09-17-99 03:50 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I think they call it "the scent of a woman"
Good Work!

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9 posted 09-17-99 04:29 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

This is wonderful, Sy. I agree with 'Deer...
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 09-17-99 06:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Julie,
You are right.
Sally S,
Thank you.
Nan
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I've got some of that exotic aphrodisiac stuff - is that it?
Seymour Tabin
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My Nan,
You are loaded. *L*
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Pheromones

or love bugs...*LOL*

Nice one Sy

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Michael
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14 posted 09-18-99 12:14 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I love this piece Seymour,
It is quite soothing.

Michael
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Makes scents to me...

PAL

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Seymour Tabin
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Caroline, Michael and Paul,
Thank you all for the comments and humor.
Always enjoy reading your remarks.
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Seymour,
Very nice. 'I vibrate from hard to mellow
Like a sweet stroke on a cello.'

Excellent line. Really enjoyed this a lot.
Tyson
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Johnt300,
Don't like to leave anyone unanswered. I thank you much for the kind touch. Have a good one.
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Why of course it's good! Seymour wrote it!


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Dsnyder,
You are a living doll. *L*
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21 posted 09-20-1999 01:14 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Excellent verse!

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Seymour Tabin
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Dream Evil,
Excellent from you has made my day. Thank you.
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you still got the touch
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Sy,I love this. Parts of thoughts and sentences dance swiftly through my mind. Would love to make a fancier reply. But it is late in the morning for me( as I work late night shift) and I am too tired to be clever. Just need to say once again, thank you for you and your quick and witty mind.  mind. marty
 
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