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hoot_owl_rn
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(I wrote this tonight online in a matter of about 2 minutes...not title and needs some brushing up)

Soft mist falls upon my skin
And I am coming to your shore
I'm adrift upon your waves
Wanting only to have more
Shall I dare the waters edge
Be this a chance I care to take
Guide me softly towards your shore
And rock me gently in your wake

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Nan
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Not bad for two minutes - when you decide the title, let me know and I'll change it for you.... I can't do that in five minutes, never mind two....
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That's a cool start there Hoot!!! Hope to know the title soon!!

Thanks



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hoot_owl_rn
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Thanks Just and Nan...actually I was hoping someone on here might give a suggestion where that is concerned

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4 posted 09-16-99 02:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Homecoming?

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But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

hoot_owl_rn
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I kind of like the ring to that one Elizabeth

I had thought possibly "In your Wake"

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Hoot,
Just excellent. Short but sweet. Very vivid for me, too.
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7 posted 09-16-99 07:51 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Glad you liked it, Hoot. This may sound corny, but the poem is beautiful no matter what the title is.

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But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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Lady Hoot: Don't you just love it when they come to you like that? Sounds great as it is. Title? How about "High Tide" or "Lovers Tide" ?
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Wow! Two minutes! What talent! Very lovely!

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Just two minutes of your time,
You come up with beautiful rhyme.
I can sit and think all day,
But two minutes? There's no way!

(that was about 1) haha, you can tell can't ya? LOL
I like Andrew's suggestion...Lovers Tide...
Another great one Hoot!
hoot_owl_rn
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Thank you everyone
Nice suggestions Andrew

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Dr.Moose1
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Hoot'
I would suggest " Lost In Your Mist " ,
but what the hell do I know ?

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hoot_owl_rn
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Oh...very nice Dr. Moose....thank you

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