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New feeling.

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beowulf_26
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0 posted 09-15-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for beowulf_26

I was just going through old work an happened upon this peice. It was the first poem I ever truly wrote.

For two weeks now I have loved
And yet I’ve loved much longer.
Every moment I think of her,
My love for her grows stronger.
But what is love or what I feel?
Is it a self created notion?
By pondering now I think not.
My love’s as strong as the oceans.
Nay, the oceans are’nt as strong as proclaimed.
They will not last forever.
Even after the fall of the world,
My love can not be severed.
And upon my love reading this rhyme
May she know she’s loved throughout all time.
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Denise
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1 posted 09-15-99 10:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Such sweet, wonderful sentiments! Did she love it?

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Nan
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2 posted 09-15-99 11:18 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Lucky lady, Beowulf....
hoot_owl_rn
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Very touching

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beowulf_26
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4 posted 09-16-99 05:07 AM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

Thank you all for responding as your thoughts mean much. Yes she did like the poem, very much so in fact. However, since then she took a liking to my good freind and him likewise. I am now with the person that all my other poetry is about. 'Twas for the best. Thank you again all.

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