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loverbaby
Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 15
Sioux City Iowa

0 posted 1999-09-15 10:09 PM


i do not want you to promise
that you will love me tomorrow
because who is to say if tomorrow will come.
and i do not want you to promise
that your love will reamain forever
because i don't want to take the chance of forever dieing young
don't say that you loved me yesterday
because yesterday has allready came and gone
i just wan tyou to love me now
and just for today
say that you love me
right now
and let's take this love day by day.

© Copyright 1999 loverbaby - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-15 10:33 PM


I really enjoyed this piece

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-09-15 10:41 PM


very nice read.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-09-15 10:57 PM


Reading this was very nice but sad..
Welcome!!

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Helewes

Iloveit
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
4 posted 1999-09-20 04:52 PM


I understand this piece completely, that is how I think too....day by day very nice!
Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
5 posted 1999-09-20 09:40 PM


Wisely spoken my friend...today is all any of us are promised......:-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

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