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Loneheart
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0 posted 09-15-99 09:40 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Fair Is My Love
Sweet rose fair flower I weep for thee.
For a flower that dies when first it
Gins to bud is a sad and solemn thing.
All thy love thou didest give to one
That let it die within an hour. Know
Not he how delicate the flower.
Between each, kiss her true love
Swearing. still, hear them not did he.
She burned with love as straw with
Fire flameth. Yet, cherish it not would he
His vow was breath and breath a vapor is
Now lost his greatest passion is...


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Denise
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1 posted 09-15-99 09:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, OK, now I understand it! Very wonderful is this one! I enjoyed!

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JennyLee
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2 posted 09-15-99 10:11 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I like it !!
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow...intense

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Isis
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4 posted 09-16-99 01:16 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

It is intense and I like it too!
There is no grayer hour than that just before the dawn..

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Loneheart
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5 posted 09-16-99 12:50 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Thank you one and all who knows if I hang around all the truly great poets upon this
forum maybe I will learn to write as well
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-16-99 01:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Loneheart,
You write well enough, good job.
Pepper
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yes,....beautifully written....I enjoyed the read......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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