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Justbleu
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0 posted 09-15-99 06:26 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Up above our sun
Down below the dirt
Inside the fishes mouth
Upside down
Where is it??
Behind the star
Under the feet of that old man
Within a heart of the television set
It is not there
I do not know it
Blustering by as it rakes past the trees
I sense something unreal to me
Through the screech of the fire engine I hear it
Deep within the flavor of the frozen cone I feel it
In the traces of of our mere words I see it
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Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-15-99).]
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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-15-99 07:33 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Wow!...This is deep!

HUGS

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Justbleu
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2 posted 09-15-99 07:38 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Blush!!! Thank You

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

Severn
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3 posted 09-15-99 07:58 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Once again you've opened the channels for mass interpretation! Well done.
Justbleu
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4 posted 09-16-99 12:27 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That is what I intended to do!!! Very cool!!

Thanks a lot!! Smile

Justbleu
johnt300
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5 posted 09-16-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Justbleu,
Nice and elusive. I enjoyed this a lot. thank you.
Tyson
Isis
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6 posted 09-16-99 09:20 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Talk about teasing but beautifully done I must add...:

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Justbleu
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7 posted 09-17-99 04:19 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thanks everyone
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 09-17-99 04:23 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

37?

Justbleu
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9 posted 09-17-99 04:26 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

You lost me there Christopher!!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

passing shadows
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10 posted 04-23-2004 01:26 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a mood poem....nice
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