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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-15-99 03:14 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

If im gone tomorrow
these words are all
that will remain of I
and if im swallowed
by my self absorbed sea
dont think
just read
this is my testimony
my diary of sights
which never you see
its always just another part
of this mystery called me
unravel it
may go blind
what surprise you will find
im quite simple
just sudden
fog in your eyes



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Elizabeth
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1 posted 09-15-99 05:47 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

How true, Jackal! All our words are a part of us, and very easily can surprise others while reading. Well written.

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But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

hoot_owl_rn
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Nicely written

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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3 posted 09-15-99 07:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very moving, Jackal, with such an air of sadness. I like.
Denise
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4 posted 09-15-99 11:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done!

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