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with alll my heart and soul........to my child

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amber
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since 06-15-99
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 09-15-99 03:10 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

how will you see me,
once your beautiful eyes,
open for the first time?
will you know me right away,
or will you glance with amazement,
wondering where you are,
and if im the one who brought you here.

how will it feel,
the first time i hold you tiny hand in mine,
i can almost feel the tears now,
of joy, and love,
everything that will come from you,
will be all the happiness i will ever need.

i know that ill never want to leave you,
for an instant,
so much a part of me,
is in you,
and through your eyes,
ill see my own,
filled with all the dreams i once had,
only i wont allow yours to be broken,
never let your heart shadder,
not one single tear will fall,
without my comfort, and engcouragement,
that your better than anything,
that could ever hurt you.

im waiting with amazement,
wondering who you will be,
and will you love me,
as much as i love you?

with all my heart and soul..........to my child.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Tara Simms
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Honea Path, SC USA


1 posted 09-15-99 03:43 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

This is so beautiful and tender. I'm sure your child will enjoy reading this when he/she grows up. Wonderful work!
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2 posted 09-15-99 05:51 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Best wishes, Amber. This poem is so sweet-I echo Tara's comment.

Love,

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Justbleu
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3 posted 09-15-99 05:55 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That is a wonderful poem Amber...It is so great that you have soo much love!!

Keep following your heart....

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Isis
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4 posted 09-15-99 06:02 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A lovely poem, your child will know cos it'll show to him/her everyday in every little thing you do..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


amber
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los banos, ca,


5 posted 09-16-99 01:44 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

i pray you all are right, and i want to thank you for your support and encouragement, throughout all my writings and emotions since ive been here. thay really are appreciated.
 
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