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Justbleu
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0 posted 09-15-99 01:52 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

If I had only known
You always tried to brighten my life
To show me the silver lining in the darkest of clouds
Painted my dreams beautifully before my eyes
Bringing me to giggles when I cried
There to comfort me in the darkest of nights
Holding me so gently when I wanted to die
Never giving up when everyone else would
Understanding in that odd, peculiar, sweet sort of way
All of my silly, eccentric, strange talks and ways


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Paul Allen Lupien
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1 posted 09-15-99 02:58 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

Keep going...This needs some kind of resolution I think...It's good...if only...
Justbleu
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2 posted 09-15-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thanks!! I agree with you...but at this time I don't know the ending!!

Someday I'll know!!

Justbleu
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3 posted 09-15-99 06:24 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

It needs more sure, but it's still good :

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~Isis~


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