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Drowning in pity

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-15-99 11:54 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i bleed a river
just to let you see
what this pain brings to me
you almost stopped the flow
my beautiful angel
an obstacle to save my soul
but what the pain sees
you'll never know
because your drowning in my tears
selfish me
to let you drown
im my self pity




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1 posted 09-15-99 05:54 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I don't know what to say, except that you have written another great one, Jackal. The emotions are so strong.
Isis
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2 posted 09-15-99 06:18 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

As Elizabeth said the emotions are so strong, yet it's so beautiful. Thankyou

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Wow..now that one is very deep!

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