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Open Poetry #2

Drowning in pity

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-15 11:54 AM

i bleed a river
just to let you see
what this pain brings to me
you almost stopped the flow
my beautiful angel
an obstacle to save my soul
but what the pain sees
you'll never know
because your drowning in my tears
selfish me
to let you drown
im my self pity

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Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-09-15 05:54 PM

I don't know what to say, except that you have written another great one, Jackal. The emotions are so strong.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-09-15 06:18 PM

As Elizabeth said the emotions are so strong, yet it's so beautiful. Thankyou

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-15 07:56 PM

Wow..now that one is very deep!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

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