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Painted Dreams

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Mona Lisa
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0 posted 09-15-99 11:02 AM       View Profile for Mona Lisa   Email Mona Lisa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mona Lisa

I imagined I could paint my world
as I wanted it to be.
And with the stroke of a boundless brush
create a tapestry.

To see each special colour lend
prominence to hue.
To watch my cherished hopes
as they blossom into view

And in the end, my sense of pride
would on the canvas gleam.
While I the artist basked in glory
of my painted dreams.

[This message has been edited by Mona Lisa (edited 09-15-99).]

[This message has been edited by Mona Lisa (edited 09-15-99).]
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Buzzygirl
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1 posted 09-15-99 11:04 AM       View Profile for Buzzygirl   Email Buzzygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buzzygirl

Very pretty! :-)

Buzzygirl
Mona Lisa
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2 posted 09-15-99 11:06 AM       View Profile for Mona Lisa   Email Mona Lisa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mona Lisa

Thanks for your compliment.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-15-99 07:22 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Mona Lisa.....this is a beautiful piece, flawless in it's rhyme and rhthym....very nicely done. I absolutely loved it!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Justbleu
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4 posted 09-15-99 07:24 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I have to agree with everyone...this flows so beautifully!!

Thank You for sharing...Welcome!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Isis
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5 posted 09-15-99 07:35 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I agree too, flows beautifully..
Aaah, if only we could paint our dreams and our realities...

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Alwye
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6 posted 09-15-99 08:58 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Truly beautiful work, Mona Lisa. I really admire your work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Denise
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7 posted 09-15-99 11:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, ML!

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Denise
Mona Lisa
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8 posted 09-16-99 09:54 AM       View Profile for Mona Lisa   Email Mona Lisa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mona Lisa

Thank you everyone for your remarks. The funny thing is, this poem was born out a short story I am currently writing with the same name.

Glad you liked it. : )
 
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