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Mona Lisa
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 100
Halifax, Nova Scotia

0 posted 1999-09-15 11:02 AM

I imagined I could paint my world
as I wanted it to be.
And with the stroke of a boundless brush
create a tapestry.

To see each special colour lend
prominence to hue.
To watch my cherished hopes
as they blossom into view

And in the end, my sense of pride
would on the canvas gleam.
While I the artist basked in glory
of my painted dreams.

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Buzzygirl
Junior Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 42
St. Paul, MN USA

1 posted 1999-09-15 11:04 AM

Very pretty! :-)

Buzzygirl

Mona Lisa
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 100
Halifax, Nova Scotia

2 posted 1999-09-15 11:06 AM

Thanks for your compliment.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-15 07:22 PM

Mona Lisa.....this is a beautiful piece, flawless in it's rhyme and rhthym....very nicely done. I absolutely loved it!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 1999-09-15 07:24 PM

I have to agree with everyone...this flows so beautifully!!

Thank You for sharing...Welcome!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-09-15 07:35 PM

I agree too, flows beautifully..
Aaah, if only we could paint our dreams and our realities...

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 1999-09-15 08:58 PM

Truly beautiful work, Mona Lisa. I really admire your work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-09-15 11:13 PM

Very lovely, ML!

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Denise

Mona Lisa
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 100
Halifax, Nova Scotia

8 posted 1999-09-16 09:54 AM

Thank you everyone for your remarks. The funny thing is, this poem was born out a short story I am currently writing with the same name.

Glad you liked it. : )

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