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I'll Love You

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Buzzygirl
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0 posted 09-15-99 10:31 AM       View Profile for Buzzygirl   Email Buzzygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buzzygirl

I'LL LOVE YOU

I'll love you from the early dawn
upon the morn's first ray;
and will continue to, as evening longs
the steal its light away-

I'll love you when our youth has passed
and when our energy descends;
when gray lights our wrinkled brows, so cast
with all that age attends-

I'll love you if you smile or frown
in sadness's gloom or pleasure's light;
and when the pace of life runs down
still will we find delight-
What age has tired, my eyes won't see;
Still, take a moment, and stay with me.

I'll love you for your wondrous eyes
to which my desire is betrayed;
they bear the beauty of endless skies
and will glow when the sky's beauty fades;
When they close too low to see,
They'll reflect their endless dreams on me.

I'll love you as you depart, for now
as the closure of evening sees;
please, take my kiss upon your brow,
and breath your sighs for me!
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September 1999
© Copyright 1999 Buzzygirl - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-15-99 10:36 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovely!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-15-99 11:27 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Buzzygirl,
Add a lovely for me and you will have two.
hoot_owl_rn
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Love is timeless....beautiful!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Isis
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4 posted 09-15-99 07:46 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A third lovely, great job...:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


loverbaby
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5 posted 09-15-99 10:01 PM       View Profile for loverbaby   Email loverbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for loverbaby

that was beautiful.....very real

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6 posted 09-15-99 10:15 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

another lovely....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Denise
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7 posted 09-15-99 10:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

And yet another!!!!

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Denise
Michael
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8 posted 09-17-99 03:09 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Had to search for this one, Buzzygirl, glanced over it while I was in Washington but didn't have time to reply. Even better when I can read it slow. Very well done.

michael
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9 posted 09-17-99 06:59 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Beautiful, and so sweet...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

juanita
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10 posted 09-17-99 07:32 PM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

you have my vote too, well done!
Witch's Brat
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11 posted 09-17-99 07:40 PM       View Profile for Witch's Brat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Witch's Brat

Ditto the above comments. Love it!
passing shadows
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very passionately done!
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