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can't I just skip today?

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Iloveit
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0 posted 09-15-99 10:21 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

you know I can't really handle reality
right now,
can't I just skip today?
she says to the sun and hides
her head in the pillow
my head hurts and
I think its because of the
leak in my eyes
that I am pretty sure
stems from the ache
in my heart
that I could almost bet
is because it is
so empty


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Sunshine
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1 posted 09-15-99 10:24 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is a good start to a continuation...

so I'll be watching...



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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Iloveit
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2 posted 09-15-99 10:28 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks, sunshine, my life is in such turmoil right now, that I hope the continuation is better than the present.....
suthern
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3 posted 09-15-99 10:34 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Nope (shaking head) if I have to get up and go play slave to the werk monster, so do you.... so roll your lazy hairy self out of that bed and quit feeling sorry for you before I give you a sore bohunkus to howl about! *G*

Love your poem, O&O... and hope tomorrow is a better day... right now, though, don't think about tomorrows... just take one day at a time! *S* That heart isn't empty... I've experienced its generosity!
Iloveit
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4 posted 09-15-99 10:40 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

*peaking out from the covers and whining* do I gotta?.........

and... I don't know what a bohunkus is lol, but I don't think I want a sore one.....

thanks o&o hope you have a good day too!
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 09-15-99 11:07 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: I think you're creating a rainbow my friend...

Big HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
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6 posted 09-15-99 11:13 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks rg, don't know what I would do without you guys!

big hugs
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 09-15-99 11:24 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

ILoveit,
Many people have tried in different ways
But the only way is to get up and face the day.
Enjoyed the read.
Pepper
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8 posted 09-15-99 01:47 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very well written...but I have to agree with everyone above.....you have to face the day

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Iloveit
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9 posted 09-15-99 01:53 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

come on.....I thought you guys were my friends...not one of you told me, yep...just bury your head and forget the world, you deserve to wallow in self pity for the day....hey.....maybe that's just it....you all are my friends thanks for making me smile :-)
Mr. Cucumber
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10 posted 09-15-99 01:55 PM       View Profile for Mr. Cucumber   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Mr. Cucumber

Iloveit - please don't get up - lets snuggle a little longer.... eg
Iloveit
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11 posted 09-15-99 02:03 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well hello Mr. Cucumber, I don't think we have been formally introduced, and I don't cuddle with strangers.....lol....well not too often anyway, and not so's I'd admit it...lol....and yep, cuddling under the covers with a ahemmmm "cucumber" would just about make my day today....*sticks out her hand* *ng*
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 09-15-99 02:12 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Lovey - watch out for Mr. Cucumber - he only wants one thing from you... trust me, I know him well *wink*
Iloveit
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13 posted 09-15-99 02:22 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

lol, yep, I see by the IP addresses that you do know him well....and *raised eyebrows* just what might that one thing be, Mr....ummm I mean LJ? I mean since you seem to know him so well....

lolol
Justbleu
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14 posted 09-15-99 02:43 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

LOL!!! Too cute!!

Am happy to hear you're smiling now....

It will all get better!!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Mr. Cucumber
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15 posted 09-15-99 03:09 PM       View Profile for Mr. Cucumber   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Mr. Cucumber

Do not listen to that scalawag Long John - the only thing I want is to be squeezed real tight in a nice warm place. All these bumps on my skin need to be squezzed flat - preferably at the same time - lol
hoot_owl_rn
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16 posted 09-15-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Iloveit....I can relate to this one. Sometimes it's easier to not get out of bed and just let the day go on without you, at least for a bit anyway

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Isis
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17 posted 09-15-99 07:22 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I was gonna cheer you up but now I don't think I have to everyone else got there ahead of me. Always try to face the day with excitement and wonder, nothing comes from burying yourself under.......
A new day brings the opportunity of new happiness..
Sorry,,, I'm a quoteaholic today..::

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


WhtDove
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18 posted 09-15-99 08:51 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I think we all want to wallow under the covers for a day. But good thing you have friends that won't let you!!
JTF
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19 posted 09-16-99 03:30 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Lovey, don't forget to ask Mr Cucumber his full name ... I've been told his first is "Grated"

Hang on and the rainbow will shine ...
passing shadows
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20 posted 04-23-2004 01:46 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I know how you feel
Artic Wind
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21 posted 11-11-2007 12:18 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

it is always good to express your feelings on paper

ARCTIC WIND
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