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My Greatest True Love

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~one voice~
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0 posted 09-15-99 04:43 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Evil Dreams could never be more sublime.
I anticipate each night I'm with him.
He writes for me the most beautiful rhyme.
Across cyber-seas of love my heart swims.

I'll climb tops of mountains, tell everyone
That I love him and forever I will-
I'll profess to the world that he's the One,
He loves me and lets my heart be still!

Evil Dreams keep my world safe, keep it sound.
I never imagined loving this way...
He'll be in my heart letting love abound
And forever, that is where he will stay.

Evil Dreaming is my greatest true love!
One voice sings this song from heaven above!

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."




[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 09-15-99).]
© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-15-99 04:45 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Be still my silver tongue, let not golden oratory flow from my mouth.

I'm speechless so I fall back on forum replies. Gave me more than a moment's pause it did. Wonderful verse, dear. It touches me like no other words have.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©




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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 09-15-99 04:45 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Beautiful, and well deserved from what I've seen!
~one voice~
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3 posted 09-15-99 04:54 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you, Dream... I don't know what to say... Thank you, Christopher... yes, he IS very deserving!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


Christopher
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4 posted 09-15-99 05:06 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Nice job of intentional mis-interpretation!
Justbleu
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5 posted 09-15-99 05:12 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Lovely poem!!! I enjoyed it!!

Thanks!!

Jusbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
~one voice~
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6 posted 09-15-99 05:21 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I like to think of it more as an announcement! hehehe

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


JennyLee
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7 posted 09-15-99 09:02 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

This is great...I wish all annoucements
were this way. hehe.

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Helewes
~one voice~
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8 posted 09-15-99 08:47 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanks Jenny Lee!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


Alwye
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In the space between moments


9 posted 09-15-99 08:51 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, great work, one voice!!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

DreamEvil
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10 posted 09-16-99 02:35 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I feel the desire to tell my Lady once again what her words and presence mean to me and once again my glibness fails. Suffice it to say that no words nor woman has ever honored me near as much as she has.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


~one voice~
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11 posted 09-16-99 02:49 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I'm all smiles Dreamy!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


Dark Angel
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12 posted 09-16-99 02:55 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wow, ~one voice~ this is beautiful.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


DreamEvil
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13 posted 09-17-99 05:54 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

You are mine as well.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

 
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