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Dark Musings on Romance

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-15-99 03:01 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I find myself sitting here every night,
thinking of how the fun we had is gone.
What happened to she who was my delight,
vanishing as she does with every dawn?
Once we found joy in being together,
caught up in the pleasure of being loved.
Now all we talk about is the weather,
while each minute makes me feel more unloved.
We spent the nights together just talking,
secure in the knowledge that we were one.
Now I feel that away you are walking,
for this relationship has come undone.


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 09-15-99 03:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wow, Soul-Brother, this is beautiful and sad
well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
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Christopher
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2 posted 09-15-99 04:43 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher


A sad truth, that many relationships end on such a note. Maybe if we tried a little harder...

Well put across brother!
~one voice~
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3 posted 09-15-99 04:50 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Sadly, she was stuck in depression.
A place she could not be rescued from...
Many had tried with not a succession...
It wasn't you, but the lack of lithium...
Give her the chance to make herself well.
She'll be alright, in time, if you're there.
Though it may hurt her, she cannot tell-
She needs to know that you love her and care.

Great poem, Dreamy..... Sad, but not true...

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"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


DreamEvil
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4 posted 09-15-99 05:00 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

It is this Dark Knight's duty to save her.
The love she offers is more than reward.
Depression badly wants to enslave her.
My silver tongue guards her as shield and sword.

I will love her all of my days.
I will care for her always.



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-15-99).]
Justbleu
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5 posted 09-15-99 05:15 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That was sad!!!

But, I likes it anywayz!!

Nice Poem!!

Justbleu

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