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It's 12:20, and rain is falling.

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Richard 33
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0 posted 09-15-99 01:29 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richard 33

It's 12:20 am, and rain is falling,it's sound is so relaxing as it hits the roof.
The soft light of my lamp by my computer
lights my way. as I touch the keys I think of
you. I hang onto every word you type in
anticipation, anxiously awaiting your reply.
You are so far away, but never have you
been so close. My mind is racing, do you feel the same way as I do?
Secret one that I admire so, I would gladly
stand in the rain, if I could only embrace
you. I have never seen such spirited beauty,
such sincere expression.
If by some chance I am only dreaming, it is
one from which I do not want to emerge, or be
awakened! Cyber love has blossomed in my
soul.
I would be flying to heights untold, if it
was only you I could hold.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-15-99).]
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Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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1 posted 09-15-99 01:40 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Wow!!! I felt those sweet things not so long ago!!! But, it was only a dream!! Enjoy, and I hope the joy and happiness last!!!!

Very nice!!!


Love and friendship can be so magical!!!

Justbleu

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Isis
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2 posted 09-15-99 01:47 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beatifully done, who's the lucky one?
New love is there anything sweeter?
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~Isis~


Justbleu
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3 posted 09-15-99 01:55 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I have to say more....I read this again and it brought tears to my eyes!! Some of the words you write and feel are things that were shared between my last love and I!! It was a love so sweet, and one I will not forget easily!! God bless you both, and stay dreaming forever!!

Thanks again!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 09-15-99 09:46 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah, the thoughts that run through a man's head when he's alone at night....fabulously exquisite...

This is one of your most touching poems I've read...very very heartfelt...great job! ***curtsies

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


susieQ_luccier
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5 posted 09-15-99 10:02 AM       View Profile for susieQ_luccier   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for susieQ_luccier

I remember feeling this way once,but then my heart was broken by a cyber love. I never want to be there again. I hope yours works for you. good luck!
WhtDove
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6 posted 09-15-99 11:33 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Aww! Cyber love. This was sweet!
Richard 33
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7 posted 09-15-99 01:12 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Thank you all so much. It is true it was
from the heart. I've been divorced for a
year, and a half, and never thought I would feel this way again. I don't know whether
it will work or not, I'm not even sure she
knows that she's the one.
Mr. Cucumber
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8 posted 09-15-99 01:28 PM       View Profile for Mr. Cucumber   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Mr. Cucumber

Richard

Don't worry, she will be safe with me. lol

just kidding - new love is always so intense - the real goal is to keep it new. Good luck in your relationship.
Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


9 posted 09-15-99 02:23 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

hee hee, ho ho ho, ha ha.
I appreciate your humor, I think you are
absolutely right, I just hope she recognizes
herself!!!

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-15-99).]
Paul Allen Lupien
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since 09-09-99
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10 posted 09-15-99 02:42 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

Ahh Richard-be bold-State her name.Nothing as wasted as love unexpressed.Unless a dream will satisfy-be bold!No response can come without a proper address.Address your desire and hope...

Hey,but what do I know?

PAL



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Richard 33
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11 posted 09-15-99 03:13 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

I made the choice & that's what I just did.
If she didn't know before, she will know
now. I just hope I did the right thing, don't
want to ruin a good friendship !!!
 
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