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A Beginning

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johnt300
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0 posted 09-14-99 11:56 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for johnt300

A Beginning


When we leave here,
May our souls rest
Side by side,
Wander in and out
Of time,
Freely from mountain
To stream to sea.

May we live within
Each others soul,
No more regrets
Of all that was
Said,
No more regrets
Of all that was
Done.

Soaring through our
New world,
No voices to speak,
One mind,
One thought,
We surround ourselves
With one another.

We make up for time lost,
And love each other
To no end.
© Copyright 1999 johnt300 - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 09-15-99 12:01 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very metaphysical! I like it!
johnt300
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2 posted 09-15-99 12:13 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Thank you again. I have dug up an old floppy disc of poems that I liked enough to keep, and I'm glad that I did. I am very happy to find out that it can be enjoyed by others. I sure enjoyed writing them, and when I read them back to myself, for the most part I have a good feeling about them. But after a while you start to wonder if you haven't forced them to grow on yourself, if only to pat yourself on the back. I love seeing others enjoy it, too. I wish I knew about this site six months ago. There is some really awesome work at this site, and I'm glad a few awesome poets actually like my poems. I guess that's a long enough post this time around. Thanks again, all.
Tyson
Severn
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3 posted 09-15-99 12:56 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well, you're very welcome here! Keep digging them up, OK?
Isis
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4 posted 09-15-99 01:15 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I agree with Severn, keep sharing these 'older' poems from disc. I loved this one.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Justbleu
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5 posted 09-15-99 01:23 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Cool Poem!! Keep them coming!!!!!

Thanks!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
johnt300
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6 posted 09-15-99 12:25 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

severn, isis, justbleu,
Thank you for your replies. I hope to have something new up within a week or two. Til then....
Tyson
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 09-15-99 12:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tyson...this is absolutely beautiful. Your words are so sincerly spoken. It would have been a terrible shame had this one been lost and not shared for our viewing pleasure.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Elizabeth
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8 posted 09-15-99 05:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Keep them coming Tyson! I loved this one.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

johnt300
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9 posted 09-16-99 07:24 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Hoot,
Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.
Tyson
johnt300
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10 posted 09-16-99 07:25 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Elizabeth,
Thank you very much. I hope to keep them coming. Hope to see more from you, too.
Tyson
Nan
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11 posted 09-16-99 07:41 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

....um....yep - This is a good one for sure - Now I have to go find the rest of your posts... scuse me - putting on my super sleuth costume...
johnt300
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12 posted 09-18-99 12:12 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Thank you, Nan.
And thank you for finding the others, too. Take care.
Tyson
caroline
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13 posted 09-18-99 12:15 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Beautiful, Tyson...you definitely add to my reading pleasure here at PiP. Glad you found us

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
johnt300
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14 posted 09-18-99 12:25 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Hi Caroline,
Thank you. I was lucky enough to have this site recommended to me from a good friend. I am very glad you liked this. Bye.
Tyson
hoot_owl_rn
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Tyson, I had to reply to this yet another time as I have come back and read it numerous times since your posting. It is so romantically beautiful...isn't that what true love is all about, no regrets, no need for words?

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
johnt300
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16 posted 09-18-99 12:31 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Hoot,
That is what true love is about, yes. Thank you for another kind reply. I am assuming you are online. See you in a minute or two, hopefully.
Tyson
Paul Allen Lupien
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17 posted 09-18-99 01:03 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

This one kinda gave me a free-feeling rush.A floaty kind of flying fun sensation.Love the metaphysical stuff.

PAl

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johnt300
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18 posted 09-18-99 01:42 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Paul,
Thank you! That's a great compliment. Take care.
Tyson
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