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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-14 11:13 PM


Her Honor

An open field

Surrounded by trees

Wispering of the wind

Cry ot the moon

Silence in the hills

Still waters

Torn hearts

Steel to Steel

Passion to Passion

An unbearable pull

Fear in the eyes of one

Weeping willow

Struck within

Piercing pain

A falling angel

Red to Blue

Blue to Red


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© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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1 posted 1999-09-14 11:17 PM


I like this! The sharp images work really well. My interpretation is of a duel, but I think this could be interpreted in many ways. Well done.
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-14 11:19 PM


Thanks...my favorite poems are when they can relate to almost anyone and can be interpreted in many ways!!


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