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rising above the shore

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Sundance
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0 posted 09-14-99 09:26 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

the clouds that rise above the shore,
flost swiftly by and forevermore,
shall be a part of the nature in me,
the really wants to make you see,
that life is really a silent storm,
that rages when your in the norm,
and trying to hide what is really there,
moving around and really doesn't care.
why don't you belive me now?
and will you ever really know how,
to love me with your whole heart in mind,
and will you ever really find,
the way to do this without hurt,
and will I ever be alert,
to the fact that you and I,
shall see the clounds way up high,
and will be different forevermore,
adifferent sea, and a different shore.

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Denise
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1 posted 09-14-99 09:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another good one!

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Sundance
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2 posted 09-14-99 09:29 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

thanks again, I am on a poetry craze!

Sundance
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3 posted 09-15-99 08:19 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

anyone else?

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-15-99 08:27 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Again, nicely done piece. I liked the flow to this one.

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Emmy
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5 posted 09-16-99 06:39 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

I TOLD ya this was one of your best!!! This has got to be my favorite of yours. Wonderfully done, "Sundance"
Sundance
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6 posted 09-19-99 04:30 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Thanks u guys~

Sundance
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7 posted 09-19-99 05:04 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

anyone else?




Artur Hawkwing
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8 posted 09-19-99 05:08 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Wow, just how do you do it?
passing shadows
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I like this one
 
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