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Me,the ground,the sea,the sun

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Sundance
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0 posted 09-14-99 09:20 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

I awake to her the chirp of birds,
to hear them singing those wonderful words,
that make me rise to my feet,
and go out and then I meet,
the lovely sound and lovely place,
that opens my ears and sooths my face,
the wind that is against my skin,
my skin so bare and when,
I look at the ground,oh so wet,
and then I know why it's left,
that I may walk a top my feet,
and then the earth and I shall meet,
we melt together and then become one,
me, the ground, the sea, the sun.
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1 posted 09-14-99 09:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Sundance, I thoroughly enjoyed this one!

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Sundance
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2 posted 09-14-99 09:27 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

thanks


Sundance
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3 posted 09-15-99 08:20 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

anyone else?

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Very beautiful!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Sundance
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5 posted 09-19-99 04:35 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

thanks!

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A lovely poem! You are evoking the imagery very well in this poem, with the environment seeming to blend in. I could feel it. When I read poems, I try to "sense" something... some kind of vision. Nice ambience, Sundance! Your name is fitting.
Sundance
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7 posted 09-19-99 05:03 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

thank-you!




Sundance
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8 posted 09-24-1999 07:54 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Anyone else?
 
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