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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-09-14 09:08 PM


Glittery stardust showers a bright, flamboyant sunset,
As a milky haze encircles the quietly pulsing earth.
Your beautiful eyes shine like the day we first met,
As sparkling hues of vibrant love are softly birthed.

Flowers are scattered about, great splashes of brilliance,
Their beauty dotting the swaying grasses of eternal meadows.
A single touch of you makes this jumbled world make sense,
Your warm embrace makes the depths of my heart warmly glow.

The odds pushed down upon us, a smothering shroud of black,
But the softest shimmer of fate melted the heavy darkness.
The reaching tendrils of time have again brought you back,
Once more I am softly carried within the embrace of bliss.

Alone we are within this shining expanse of quiet wonder,
Lost within the swirling depths of each other's eyes.
The power of our love shouts like electrified thunder,
It's strange beauty lighting the mysterious sapphire skies.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-14 09:24 PM


Alwye, this is perhaps my favorite piece that you have done! Absoulutely wonderful!


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Denise

caroline
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2 posted 1999-09-14 09:46 PM


You really pen emotion well, Alwye. This is gorgeous!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

DreamEvil
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3 posted 1999-09-14 09:53 PM


I reply my friend only to tell you that your progress as a poetess proceeds apace.

Otherwise, I would sound the same. Your work is always excellent.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©



Alwye
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In the space between moments
4 posted 1999-09-14 10:17 PM


Thank you all very much..this was written for someone very special and I put a lot of my personal fantasies into it...thanks again, my fellow poets!!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


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