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male perspective on the female of the species

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juanita
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0 posted 09-14-99 08:57 PM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

Her thoughts bulldozed my skin
A thousand needles strong
Her desires leveled my soul
Desolate landscape, scattered mortar
Her needs ravaged my body
Shivering sinew, aching ash
Her mind pierced my skull
Fierce intensity, molten lava
Her sadness crumbled my defenses
Frail fragments, gossamer thin
Her resolve strengthened mine
Never to pine in forgotten fields
Her recovery presaged mine
Phoenix like, sun seeking
Her future stretches forth
Restless wings, dreams unfulfilled
My future mirrors hers
Treading the path of infinite shroud
Do answers lurk in distant galaxies
Answers manifest in impromptu impulse.
© Copyright 1999 juanita - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-14-99 09:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good,juanita! The male and female are so different! And gladly so!

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caroline
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2 posted 09-14-99 09:48 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Good read...I enjoyed this one

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
juanita
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3 posted 09-16-99 02:14 AM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

Male and Female species always a mystery
to be solved. Thank you Denise.
I'm glad you enjoyed it Caroline, I'm also
glad that as a woman I don't think more
like a man, with all due respect to Prof.
Higgins.
PhaerieChild
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4 posted 09-16-99 03:37 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Very good read juanita...was very intense in wording and well put together. Loved it.

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