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I Humbly Wait(ForDBeth re 'They Say')

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Denise
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0 posted 09-14-99 08:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

Your doubt, your pain, I understand
-I humbly wait - to take your hand
The world is dark and harsh - I know
Beneath its scourge - I feel each blow.

For each tear shed - I shed one too
Please come to me - I'll comfort you;
Within these arms of love you'll find
Sure respite kind - true peace of mind.

And when the storms of life assail
This love of Mine shall never fail;
I'll be your anchor sure and true
And through each gale - I'll go with you.

You have been hurt - that's understood
But all your pain - I'll work for good
And though men's evil I've not wrought
I've shed My blood - redemption bought...

To loose the chains - to set souls free
To rise above life's storm-tossed sea;
There's much the mind can't understand;
Just so much pain it can withstand.

My humble heart cries out to you;
I gave My all - My life - it's true;
Your grief, your fear, I understand...
I offer you - the Master's hand.


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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-25-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 09-14-99 08:26 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

D, I love it-it really touched me. Thank you for posting.

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But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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2 posted 09-14-99 09:00 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

that's beautiful and so comforting.
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3 posted 09-14-99 09:32 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Beautiful! But maybe some different wording on the last stanza in the 2nd part. But over all it was so comforting and beautiful!!!

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4 posted 09-14-99 10:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you all for reading and commenting. I just want to share His love. We all need it so badly.

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5 posted 09-14-99 11:11 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Gorgeous. Very well written, Denise!
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6 posted 09-14-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Very nice poem. I really liked this one. Thank you.
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7 posted 09-14-99 11:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...oooops! Thanks Severn & Tyson you're sweet

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8 posted 09-14-99 11:54 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

All my life I have believed and served that Heart of Hearts...but...life has seemed to prove to me an otherwise reality.

Your words were beautiful.I still would wish them to be true-but it's been raining for too long now.

Paul

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9 posted 09-15-99 12:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you for reading and commenting, Paul. I much appreciate it! I'm sorry for your rain. I wish you fairer skies and brighter days!
Pehaps this would help. Isn't reality multi-faceted? Perhaps the facet we look at is the reality that we experience. I try to filter everything through His purpose and providence. No one's life is perfect and pain free. What we can glean from our own personal circumstances, when placed in His hands, can lead to peace of heart and mind. I wish you better days, Paul. Thanks again for your words.
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Denise...how beautifully stated, I think faith is all that has gotten me by on some days...for without faith, we are nothing.

Paul, I hope you find light amoung the clouds very soon now.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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11 posted 09-15-99 09:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Hoot. I share your sentiments.
BTW - LOVE your signature line!

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Thank you for replying to my poem.It was very nicely written.I just can't bring myself to believe in something I have never seen.Sorry it took me so long to get back to you guys.Very nice poem Denise.


DBeth

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You're quite welcome, DBeth, I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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14 posted 05-12-2003 10:21 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

I just found this tonight and am going to keep it, because it's something I need to remember!

~Elizabeth

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

 
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