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In The Beginning... (with thanks to Craig )

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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 09-14-99 05:03 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Parables and prophecies , weathered by lifes storms.
All we are or will ever be , expressed in written form .
Solitary souls do seek , and here-in find a peace .
Setting forth in metered rhyme , what we have chosen to release .
Introspective musings , at least on paper may.
Open portals to hidden realms , so we may see though what they say .
New formed thoughts conceptualized , dreams brought forth in ink .
Shared experience benefits us all , the more clearly we may think .
In troubled times , safe haven found .
Never closing , open doors .
Pardoning our digressions , whereas some might call us bores .
Only by exploring , can we search and hope to find .
Enough grist to feed the hoppers , of the mills inside our minds .
Truth and understanding , are but two of what we speak .
Rare indeed our poetic creed , and the grails that we seek .
Yonder I will walk with thee , apart but not alone , for there in treasured company , is a place we may call home .

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© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-15-99 02:43 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

So true, all of it....:-))

HUGS



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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-15-99 11:48 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dr.Moose1,
You are quite the literate
And your words considerate
All your phrases are quite right
But it rings an aweful sight.

Enjoyed the poem.
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 09-15-99 11:58 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Excellent tribute to a place we all love!!!
Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 09-15-99 04:33 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Rainbow , Seymour , and Suthern ,
Thanks for your comments . This was my first
attempt at acrostic poetry ( blame it on Craig ) I am posting more shortly , " Just Like a Kid With a New Toy " Thanks again !

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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-15-99 08:10 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow...this is wonderfully written!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
WhtDove
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6 posted 09-15-99 08:42 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Awesome! What wording you used! Really awesome!
Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 09-15-99 08:51 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Hoot & WhtDove , Thanks for the accolades .
This is definitely a "learn as you go site" , and I hope to learn as much as possible from all of you .

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Denise
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Excellent piece! You certainly have a way with words!

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Denise
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beautiful!
Artic Wind
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10 posted 11-11-2007 12:30 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

beautiful

ARCTIC WIND
 
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