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Sa Petite Mort (Her Little Death)

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-14-99 04:18 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Je suis tenu dans la poignée de sa petite mort.
Un tel ecstasy est le bruit d'une voix.
Le tressaillement qu'elle me donne vole loin mon souffle.
Il humilie pour savoir que je suis son choix.

Un tel ecstasy est le bruit d'une voix.
Aucune musique n'a pu remuer mon moitié d'âme autant.
Il humilie pour savoir que je suis son choix.
Ma âme froide brûle pour son contact passionné.

Aucune musique n'a pu remuer mon moitié d'âme autant.
Elle est l'objet de mon concupiscence.
Ma âme froide brûle pour son contact passionné.
J'aspire à son munificence vigoureux.

Elle est l'objet de mon concupiscence.
Un visage féerique cache le désir légèrement voilé.
J'aspire à son munificence vigoureux.
La convoitise précipite mes veines comme le feu liquide.

Un visage féerique cache le désir légèrement voilé.
Elle berce mon esprit près de son sein.
La convoitise précipite mes veines comme le feu liquide.
Par passion ravie j'ai été béni.

Elle berce mon esprit près de son sein.
Le tressaillement qu'elle me donne vole loin mon souffle.
Par passion ravie j'ai été béni.
Je suis tenu dans la poignée de sa petite mort.


Translation

I'm held in the grip of her little death.
Such ecstasy is the sound of one voice.
The thrill she gives me steals away my breath.
It's humbling to know that I am her choice.

Such ecstasy is the sound of one voice.
No music could stir my soul half as much.
It's humbling to know that I am her choice.
My cold soul burns for her hot-blooded touch.

No music could stir my soul half as much.
She is the object of my concupiscence.
My cold soul burns for her hot-blooded touch.
I yearn for her lusty munificence.

She is the object of my concupiscence.
An elfin face hides thinly veiled desire.
I yearn for her lusty munificence.
Lust rushes my veins like liquid fire.

An elfin face hides thinly veiled desire.
She cradles my spirit close to her breast.
Lust rushes my veins like liquid fire.
By rapturous passion I have been blessed.

She cradles my spirit close to her breast.
The thrill she gives me steals away my breath.
By rapturous passion I have been blessed.
I'm held in the grip of her little death.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


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~one voice~
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1 posted 09-14-99 04:22 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, this is so wonderful!!! It truly melts my soul!!! I don't know even know what to say that I haven't already said to you... My heart is humbled. That's the truth. And that's just for the sentiment! As for the "message," I'll let you know what I think later... For now, I have to say that it's getting warm in here... Anyone got a fan?

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."



[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 09-14-99).]
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-14-99 08:54 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
The poem is magnificent, as an outsider that's all I can say.
JennyLee
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3 posted 09-14-99 09:44 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Once again...what can I say...this one
is like a song that lust sings to ones
deeper longings. Thanks...Whew....!!

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Helewes
WhtDove
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4 posted 09-14-99 10:37 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well written Dream! Very passionate piece.
Christopher
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5 posted 09-14-99 04:27 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Je suis tenu dans la poignée de Dream Evil...
(thought I'd steal your French...don't remember anything but cuss words from high school!)

Well done friend!
Lucie
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6 posted 09-14-99 05:08 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

This was truly a wonderful piece of work. Well done my friend!
Balladeer
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7 posted 09-14-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A worthy tribute indeed.....
DreamEvil
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8 posted 09-17-99 05:57 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Sorry to deluge Open with these verses but I feel the need to right now.
JTF
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9 posted 09-17-99 06:14 PM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Dream, I love your poem ... it's superb ...

Now, regarding the French version ... how, should I put ? ... err ... well, the English version is beautiful
Isis
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10 posted 09-17-99 07:06 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A wonderful tribute for a wonderful lady.
Beautifully done.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Paul Allen Lupien
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11 posted 09-17-99 07:24 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

Whew! Now I need a cigarette.

PAL

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