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Gesture New Member
since 1999-09-14
Posts 7 |
If all could offer you Was this rose to show how Much I feel for you. I am willing. If all I could offer you Was to hold you in times Of comforting. I am willing. If all I could offer you Was my shoulder To cry your tears on. I am willing. If all I could offer you Was my growing Love for you. I am willing. If all I could offer you Was to take your Place on death's bed. I am willing. If all I could offer you Was this rose to show how Much I feel for you. Are you willing? ------------------ -Gesture |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
If I could offer you a compliment would you be willing.? I loved this...thanksyou...: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whoa.....where do I sing up?  This is indeed a beautiful and touching piece of poetry. Very simplistic in it's language and style, but oh so well written. It speaks volumes in very few words. Thank you for posting ------------------ "This world is not conclusion. A sequel stands beyond, Invisable as music, But positive as sound." ~Emily Dickinson |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Short,sweet and very beautiful... ------------------ Helewes |
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Billy Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 25 |
I love this one. It's simple yet leaves so much to the imagination. Very well done. |
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MiLady Junior Member
since 1999-09-14
Posts 14Endicott, NY,USA |
How could they not be willing after words like that?! Very simple, but fascinating piece. Great job! |
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Gesture New Member
since 1999-09-14
Posts 7 |
Thank you all so very much for your compliments. I've actually just started to really write poems and your words are those of encouragement to me. Thanks! ------------------ -Gesture |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching Gesture! ------------------ Denise |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
Lucky for us! keep it up!!! Beautiful piece! |
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Got Rice? New Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 2so cali |
dearest boyfriend of mine.... yes people..hes mine =)....that was ever so wonderful...thank you soo much again for everything you do for me..and just being you...youre the bestest in the whole entire universe...i miss you soo much forever and ever amen...much love from me to you.. ps..true, yes, all of the above..i am willing =)with all my heart |
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TulipGirl48 Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 11glendale, ca, usa |
Dearest Cousin of mine.. Your poem is ever so lovely.. I think writing poetry about our loved ones are in the blood.. hehe.. keep up the good work.. write more for me to read =) Bye! Love,Rin ------------------ -WonderWoman |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
speaks volumes...really enjoyed the read....looking forward to more Gesture ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A deep love there you have!! Simple but, says it all!! For one who hasn't written long, I like this!! Keep on writing...and welcome!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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