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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, 'fire star' it means, although bright, through folklore I look above through yearless eyes at stars I love; Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, golden stars of fire, of ire, of light, where elvish dreams doth rest above rimming moon shining acrest; Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, 'round green trees, 'round the sky, where midnight masses gather and sing of things proud and fair; Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, flame in the void, light in darkness amidst red rocks lifeless and river glimmering rideless; Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, a river in the sky, a stairway to heaven, amidst dank pebbles in the stream as moonlight strikes the land with a gleam; Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, in the ancient tongue of Elvish maidens, from Isildur, 'dark moon' to 'Queen of the Stars', Elbereth; Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, a remnant of times lost, of old, of music played by harps, of celestial songs, the stars which conquer all, still longs; Nar'el, nar'el burns this night, Nar'el, nar'el burns this night. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ummm, I'll say very interesting! I'm not sure what this made me feel, but I sit here giddy, so I say BRAVO! he he he I'm glad you didn't decide to sit outside for long.....been missing your interesting poems!! I sure hated to see you go - but I see you didn't stay gone long - I'd dare say you're addicted !! LOL ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
haha..... I'm all smiles to be back !! I doubt that my busy schedule will keep me away from netpoets either... nice hearing from you again! Thanks for the friendly remark.  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Glad to have you back! I remember this poem! Once again, great job, I enjoyed reading it. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You're back! Yay! And this poem is, well, really unusually superb. I felt as if I was running through a land of fairies. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Welcome back...and with fabulous poem too! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Three welcomes in a row is WELCOMING! Also, to know how people can react to different styles of poetry is always worth knowing, when in doubt. Welcome for welcoming me. |
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MissQ Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 12Clarksdale, MS 38614 |
Lovely.....~smile~ |
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