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Nar'el

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Artur Hawkwing
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0 posted 09-14-99 01:21 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
'fire star' it means, although bright,
through folklore I look above
through yearless eyes at stars I love;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
golden stars of fire, of ire, of light,
where elvish dreams doth rest
above rimming moon shining acrest;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
'round green trees, 'round the sky,
where midnight masses gather
and sing of things proud and fair;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
flame in the void, light in darkness
amidst red rocks lifeless
and river glimmering rideless;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
a river in the sky, a stairway to heaven,
amidst dank pebbles in the stream
as moonlight strikes the land with a gleam;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
in the ancient tongue of Elvish maidens,
from Isildur, 'dark moon'
to 'Queen of the Stars', Elbereth;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
a remnant of times lost, of old,
of music played by harps, of celestial songs,
the stars which conquer all, still longs;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
Nar'el, nar'el burns this night.
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 09-14-99 10:59 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ummm, I'll say very interesting! I'm not sure what this made me feel, but I sit here giddy, so I say BRAVO! he he he I'm glad you didn't decide to sit outside for long.....been missing your interesting poems!! I sure hated to see you go - but I see you didn't stay gone long - I'd dare say you're addicted !! LOL

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Artur Hawkwing
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2 posted 09-14-99 05:51 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

haha.....

I'm all smiles to be back !! I doubt that my busy schedule will keep me away from netpoets either... nice hearing from you again! Thanks for the friendly remark.

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3 posted 09-14-99 07:54 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Glad to have you back! I remember this poem! Once again, great job, I enjoyed reading it.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Severn
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4 posted 09-14-99 10:26 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You're back! Yay! And this poem is, well, really unusually superb. I felt as if I was running through a land of fairies.
Dragoness
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5 posted 09-14-99 10:29 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Welcome back...and with fabulous poem too!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Artur Hawkwing
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6 posted 09-16-99 10:43 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Three welcomes in a row is WELCOMING! Also, to know how people can react to different styles of poetry is always worth knowing, when in doubt. Welcome for welcoming me.
MissQ
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7 posted 09-16-99 11:56 AM       View Profile for MissQ   Email MissQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MissQ

Lovely.....~smile~
 
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