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MsLola New Member
since 1999-09-14
Posts 5Campbell, CA |
It was just an innocent review Look, read, move on I swear, that was the intent But, then I was struck, By this kind warm smile The kind you see, And feel, Way inside. I took a little chance, Wrote a little note Took a bigger chance, And sent it. He responded It was just an innocent note We began to correspond He wanted to hear my voice Just an innocent call That's all it was to be We talked, It became more, much more We wrote question after question, Answer after answer We found ourselves waiting, Where is the mail? We had to meet, We did. It was wonderful….. You know when it all clicks It clicked Time has passed And it has grown This wonderful feeling Now we wait, Wonder, And see where it leads Stop analyzing, Continue trusting Feel good Be happy………….. (to be continued) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
OH...I like this....a good poem and a romantic mystery! I look forward to the next installment!   |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Looking forward to part two and hoping for a happy ending  ------------------ "This world is not conclusion. A sequel stands beyond, Invisable as music, But positive as sound." ~Emily Dickinson |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Me too... HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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