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Innocent

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MsLola
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since 09-14-99
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0 posted 09-14-99 12:52 AM       View Profile for MsLola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MsLola

It was just an innocent review
Look, read, move on
I swear, that was the intent
But, then I was struck,
By this kind warm smile
The kind you see,
And feel,
Way inside.
I took a little chance,
Wrote a little note
Took a bigger chance,
And sent it.
He responded
It was just an innocent note
We began to correspond
He wanted to hear my voice
Just an innocent call
That's all it was to be
We talked,
It became more, much more
We wrote question after question,
Answer after answer
We found ourselves waiting,
Where is the mail?
We had to meet,
We did.
It was wonderful…..
You know when it all clicks
It clicked
Time has passed
And it has grown
This wonderful feeling
Now we wait,
Wonder,
And see where it leads
Stop analyzing,
Continue trusting
Feel good
Be happy…………..

(to be continued)
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-14-99 01:01 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

OH...I like this....a good poem and a romantic mystery! I look forward to the next installment!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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2 posted 09-14-99 09:38 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Looking forward to part two and hoping for a happy ending

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson
RainbowGirl
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since 07-31-99
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3 posted 09-14-99 01:41 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Me too...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

 
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