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I cherish you Fall...

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Master
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0 posted 09-13-99 10:27 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I cherish you Fall; youíre my love and my curse
Iím dying of thirst; my fatigue pays its toll
I beg you, donít stall, order clouds to burst,
I will crawl to the puddles to fill up my soul

Here you stand on the edge, facing your fate
And the time will not wait, turning over the page
It will set off the change, not a second delayed,
Immature at your age you will vacate the stage

Drop by drop, leaf by leaf, you are closer to snow
I observe you in awe, with a great disbelief,
Not a wrinkle of grief even though you must go
And with less time to breathe only higher you heave

Only higher you rise in a whirlpool of leaves
While natureís striptease attracts all the eyes
And you flee in disguise while nobody sees
Then you cease to exist slowly shrinking in size


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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-14-99).]
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caroline
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1 posted 09-13-99 10:33 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Master this is quite beautiful. The imagery is outstanding I enjoyed it much.

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Master
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2 posted 09-13-99 11:07 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Caroline, I'm glad you liked it.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-14-99 09:32 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

All I can say is this is a very well written piece. The images you have created with your words are fantastic. Fall happens to be my favorite of all seasons

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A sequel stands beyond,
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But positive as sound."
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Master
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4 posted 09-14-99 03:01 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Mine too, hoot! Thanks for responding!

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I fell in love and kept on falling
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-14-99 03:34 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Master,
Enjoyed the read.
Master
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6 posted 09-14-99 07:24 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

THanks Seymore, glad you liked it.
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7 posted 09-14-99 08:08 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I like fall and winter best myself, Master! You have captured it so well in another fantastic piece.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Master
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8 posted 09-14-99 08:49 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Fall is also my favorite season, thanks Elizabeth!
Master
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9 posted 09-14-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I've edited it a bit, what do you think?
Justbleu
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10 posted 09-15-99 01:22 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I really enjoyed that!!! The imagary was beautiful!! Autumn is my favorite season!!
Nice poem!!

Thanks

Justbleu

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yes, very beautiful imagery indeed Master.....here in south Florida there really is no Autumn, so thanks for the lovely picture.........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Master
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Thanks Justbleu! Autumn is my fav season also.
Pepper, I'm glad you liked it. Here in NY Autumn is beautiful, I love this kind of weather. Thanks for your comments.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
 
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