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~one voice~
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0 posted 09-13-99 09:42 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

I've been drifting in a sea of discourse.
Knowing fully and not giving a damn.
Wishing for wind to blow me off this course,
Because I don't even know where I am.

Drowning with no motivation to swim.
Drifting without having a reason why.
Sinking each time that I think about him.
Too much salt in the sea to let me cry...

I hear voices telling me to move on.
I search for strength to turn over and swim.
It's so far away- how can I go on?
I have to- I need to get over him.

Oh, the dreaded time has finally come.
I must swallow this dose of lithium.

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-13-99 09:44 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Slam!

The sound of my expectations getting dashed, my dear. NOT what I expected at all, for that and other things, I thank you, my Lady.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
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~one voice~
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2 posted 09-13-99 09:49 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

You're welcome for the surprise! However, I didn't intend it to be one. Just sort of flowed through my fingers, you know?

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

Nicole
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3 posted 09-14-99 01:49 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Och! ~ wow, girl...
Isis
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4 posted 09-14-99 02:28 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You blew me away!!!!:
So sad.

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~Isis~


~one voice~
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5 posted 09-14-99 04:42 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you, Satiate and Isis!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."



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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-14-99 08:48 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

One Voice,
Excellent, One of your best.
~one voice~
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7 posted 09-14-99 01:58 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Seymour, thank you very much! (Do you really think so?)

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


moonmoon
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well written one voice...Very sad.. -sigh-

It really gave me that helpless sense of drowning...Thanks for sharing it..
passing shadows
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I feel the same way
 
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