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Without A Doubt

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-13-99 09:04 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

You tore my hellish world into pieces.
I was forced to abandon all my doubt.
The hatred beating in my heart ceases.
Dangling my soul twisted my heart about.

My fevered sanity cries out for you.
I feel hollow from the loss of my pain.
The night that we met I have come to rue.
A lonely litany is my refrain.

I fell in love with you, deeply and fast.
For a single touch of your hand I yearn.
Now I find those first moments are long past.
Dispassion my carved up heart must relearn.

My hot-blooded heartbreaker tell me true,
can I forget the pain of knowing you?


©1999 DreamEvil


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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
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beowulf_26
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1 posted 09-13-99 09:13 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

The first line says it all. Very thick. Hope everything goes well, keep up the work.

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~one voice~
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2 posted 09-13-99 09:16 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Very angry Dream! I can sense the hurt that you feel as you write this piece. Excellent work though...

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

JennyLee
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3 posted 09-13-99 09:18 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

What can I say...again your talent is
shining..."Dispassion my carved up heart must relearn." Took hold of me and wouldn't
let go !!

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Helewes
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4 posted 09-13-99 09:19 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Well, this is so-so...kind of dull and boring if you ask me (gotcha!)...wondered what you would do if I started out that way! LOL

If you write this good consistantly, I may have to hang up my quill.....sigh...... excellent as usual, DE.
caroline
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5 posted 09-13-99 09:42 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I'm running out of superlatives.
You are daunting in your excellence, Sir Dream.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 09-14-99 09:25 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done Dream

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson
Iloveit
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7 posted 09-14-99 11:46 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

every once in a while I am tempted to call myself a poet, but then I come here and read your work, so many poems, on so many varied subjects and emotions, and all very well done!....you have a gift, thank you for using it here
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 09-14-99 12:31 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Dream: I echo the sentiments of all before. Your writing is excellent and a challenge to us all to write form within our deepest emotions.
WhtDove
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9 posted 09-14-99 02:23 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

No doubt Andrew! What can I say, I ditto the above also! You have no boundaries or limits in your writing. That is certainly a gift.
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