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Limericks for the Lunatics |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
There once was a rag named Toe who had no place to go til he found us at Passion and we brought to fashion now we can’t get the darn Toe to go! There once was a ballad named ‘Deer whose writing was usually clear til he ventured one day into the Toerag fray now over his shoulder he must constantly peer There once was a passionate jewel who’s poets were writing fuel the facets were clear Toerag and Balladeer but it’s not clear which one is the fool These limericks are really lame and you have played a good game to read and write more in a poetic war may you both have fortune and fame. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
PDV: Shouldn't that be 'faucets'?...ooops but perhaps my English humour needs flushing out..*g* HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL....facets to the jewel is what I was going for here....... I'm so confused! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You may be "confused" but you write well my dear!!! lol.... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sorry PDV...Must have read fool as something different...must be time for bed...*g* HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-13-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
LOL  I've just begun to follow this feud with interest. Hilarious it is. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yes, there is a fool. That is clear And it's not our sweet, kind Balladeer It must be that Toerag Who dresses in drag And hums "Save the Queen" through his rear. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Be careful 'deer! There are several here who would take offense at the God Save the Queen remark...they may bring ammunition to the War of the Words!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think neither one is the fool They both use the pen as a tool To give us their smiles Though I fear all the while 'Deer's attention is captured by wool!! Great job, PDV!!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The more of these poems of Toe and Deer I find...the more I want to read!!! They are soooo funny!! Makes you 2 look like a couple of clowns!! This was good...very enjoyable read!!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-16-99).] |
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