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There's No Rainbow

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-13-99 08:03 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


There's No Rainbow

Looking out to the Horizon
Over this great blue Ocean
This time, the Sun is shining
So Bright
It's blinding

Last time
I was freezing cold
There was a beautiful Rainbow
On the other side a pot of Gold
I knew our love would grow

Here at this place again
This time, there's no Rainbow
That path has come to an end
And my heart has lost it's glow

As I sit here and receive
The sun's passionate kiss
My Love, I do believe
This Heart O'mine you'll miss

I go over your letters
Letters of hope and Love
You were my one and only
Sweet Angel from above

I look up to the Cobult Blue sky
A Tear dwell's within my eye
Letting out a defeated Sigh....
I fall to my knees and cry




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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-13-99 08:10 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

and here I am...not sure I'm the 'pot of gold' though, I suspect not...but each new day has the option of being one...I hope your tomorrow brings that to you..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
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2 posted 09-13-99 08:12 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A lost love is always so sad. Well written.
But you will have a greater love one day, the love of your child. It's a bigger and different love than that for a man, and equally if not more rewarding.
Thanks for sharing. I saw you on the cliff face.......:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


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3 posted 09-13-99 08:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I hope that you find your rainbow and pot of gold, Dark Angel. You wrote a wonderful poem about losing your love. The emotion is very deep.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

DreamEvil
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4 posted 09-13-99 08:29 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Well now, soul-sister. Quite a farewell you present.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvilŠ


Dark Angel
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5 posted 09-13-99 09:02 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Rainbow Girl, thank you so much

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Isis, I do have the love of my child, and it is the grandest most greatest love I have ever known
This poem was not written for a man but for
another woman (oops)
Isis... I saw you too
Thanks so much
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Thank you Elizabeth

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Soul-Brother thank you, and yes it is time for farewell, thanks so much for your support

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


passing shadows
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6 posted 04-23-2004 02:14 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

this hits home
 
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