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Loneheart
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since 1999-09-13
Posts 92
Eastern US

0 posted 1999-09-13 07:55 PM


The Window To Your Soul
My soul calls unto thee fair maid its secrets shall only ye behold.
Will thee answer?
With gentle words of passion or shall thee tarry to be sure if my passion
I pledge unto thee be of honest report has not my heart been open unto thee for thy eyes
To inspect as thou wish? Can not thy heart hear the words my soul speaks unto thee?
Know ye not fair maiden that time is a precious gift that is given unto those who
Know how to savor its wealth if we have the opportunity to grasp one of life’s most treasured
Gifts a true and complete Love
Should we not cling unto it savoring all it has to offer?
Nay fair maiden tarry not I pray thee for I have looked deep into thy soul
Moreover, you have conquered Mine soul with thy gentleness
Thy radiant beauty has excited all mine hidden longings
Yea fair maid I say unto thee of thy passions have I drank
And drunk am I with longings of thee open thy window unto thy soul
That I may enter and enjoy thy pleasures for live with out them I can not…


Written By LBS
a.k.a.
Loneheart


© Copyright 1999 Loneheart - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-13 08:36 PM


Very lovely indeed! I enjoyed this one too!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-14 09:14 AM


"And drunk am I with longings of thee open thy window unto thy soul
That I may enter and enjoy thy pleasures for live with out them I can not"

Very nicely stated!

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-09-14 10:06 AM


Very beautiful...makes me want to await my
"Knight" heehee.

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Helewes

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