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BrightLight
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0 posted 09-13-99 06:06 PM       View Profile for BrightLight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrightLight

Carnations

Multicolored carnations
together in a bunch.
Creating sunshine
huddled in a crunch.
Fostering happiness
laughter filling the air.
Touching conversation,
look at your beautiful hair.
Linking minds
meeting in reality,
forming a bond
through personality.
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Elizabeth
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1 posted 09-13-99 06:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

It has a very nice flow, BrightLight. I love flower poems, and the way this one is symbolic of the relationship between you and your Someone!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."



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pandora
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2 posted 09-13-99 07:22 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

A bond of personality! Isn't it wonderful when that happens? I like the thoughts and feelings this poem represents.

-pan
BrightLight
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3 posted 09-13-99 10:38 PM       View Profile for BrightLight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrightLight

Elizabeth
Thanks for your response, this was a poem about a group of people that came together to meet for a first time. A delightful time was had by all.

pandora
Thanks to you also, and yes it is wonderful when personality's bond together, especially when their minds are so colorfully related.
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-14-99 08:17 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Brightlight,
The symbolism of the poem is well taken. Good job enjoyed the poem.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-14-99 09:47 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice flow to this one

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson
JennyLee
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6 posted 09-14-99 09:50 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I like this very much.
Carnations are great flowers to write
about..
Simple and straight forward..
Thanks for sharing :~)

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Helewes
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7 posted 09-14-99 06:01 PM       View Profile for BrightLight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrightLight

Seymour, Hoot, & Jenny, I thank you all kindly for your replies.
 
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