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Dancing Girl

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 09-13-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

She danced for him
with her eyes
every part of her swayed
his eyes met hers with every sigh

She danced for him
with her smiles
every part of her swayed
his smiles joining hers cross the miles

She danced for him
with her lips
every part of her swayed
he joining her with his hips

She danced for him
with her soul
every part of her swayed
his became whole

She danced for him
with her heart
every part of her swayed
his love tearing them apart

She danced for him
with her tears
every part of her still
but the magic of love lingers here

(ok, I got told off for removing it..lol)


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-14-99).]
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1 posted 09-13-99 04:54 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

*sigh* very beautiful, RG, a beautiful picture of how a woman offers her all to the object of her love, and still......well, here's big hugs!
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Touching Rainbow!
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3 posted 09-13-99 05:01 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Rainbow, I like, I like, I like! Good job!
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4 posted 09-13-99 06:24 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks...:-))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-14-99).]
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Keep dancing..keep smiling and most of all, keep writing!
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6 posted 09-13-99 11:09 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

Very nice. It started by making me smile thinking of all those wonderful times. By the end I was sighing thinking of all those... well, you get the idea. Well written and thanx for the trip through your mind.

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7 posted 09-14-99 08:18 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

RG, I'm glad I had the privilege to read it before you deleted it ... but I understand why you did so ...
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Oh....I missed it. Always a day late and a dollar short
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9 posted 09-14-99 11:05 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks for your comments and sorry I deleted it...put it down to hormones..*g*

Hugs all

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Now who'd do such a thing as tell you off? *G* (innocently polishing my halo)
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11 posted 09-14-99 11:13 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Well now, to tell the truth, it's you...LOL

HUSG

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12 posted 09-14-99 11:20 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

lol, well heres a hug, she does the same thing to me when I am tempted to remove one and from me, thanks for putting it back it is not only well written, but a beautiful glimpse into you )
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