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Let your dreams carry you

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IsabelleSkye
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0 posted 09-13-99 03:50 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Gossamer fronds of mist
feathered across the turquoise sea
wisps of sun, in a warming blanket
upon the ocean's cold heart

a tropical breeze blown in from afar
carries with it the scent of palm
the laughter of children at play
the heavy perfume of an island afternoon

close your eyes and imagine you're there
feel the sun, as it caresses your skin
nestle into the cushioning sand
let the waves and wind sing you a lullaby

let your dreams carry you far from this life
rest in your lovers arms, ‘neath a shady palm
wake to a new morn, with a happy smile
‘til you realize it was all a just a dream


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Every man has in himself a continent of undiscovered character. Happy is he who acts Columbus to his own soul.......J. Stevens
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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 09-13-99 04:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lizzy,
Save me a place I'm ready.
LngJhnAg
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2 posted 09-13-99 04:33 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Skye

Oh baby - are you taking reservations? make it for two more - Lorelei and I are packing our bags even as I write! Good job.
WhtDove
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3 posted 09-13-99 05:16 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

If I closed my eyes I wouldn't have been able to finish reading this wonderful poem!
LOL...you did a great job! I wanna go too!
IsabelleSkye
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4 posted 09-13-99 09:41 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

The plane leaves at 4 P.M. PST, on my birthday *wink* I.Skye
johnt300
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5 posted 09-13-99 09:45 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

You put me there. Have you been there before. Just great.
Tyson
hoot_owl_rn
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Nice imagery....do have fun and happy birthday!!

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson
Paul Allen Lupien
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7 posted 09-14-99 10:50 AM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

very good imagery that lulled me to a wistful mental vacation...These are actually better than the physical ones cuz you don't have to lug the luggage or go through customs.

Philosophical question of the day:

Do our dreams carry us
or
Do we carry our dreams?

PAL

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