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You'll Be In My Heart

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-13-99 03:14 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Holding you tight is the sweetest embrace.
My doubts wash away in a flood of peace.
Love and laughter gave me a merry chase.
In you I have at last found my surcease.

I whisper sweet words to your photograph.
My eyes spill over with fresh tears of love.
For the first time in years I dare to laugh.
I give heartfelt thanks to the Lord above.

Night finds me listening to our song.
I ride on the waves of it's melody.
Within my heart do you truly belong.
You ease it's longing ache for threnody.

Love surpasses my every written word.
My voice therefore shall never go unheard.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
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Nicole
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1 posted 09-13-99 03:17 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

This speaks volumes of the two of you..such sweet words penned in her name. Makes me smile.
~one voice~
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2 posted 09-13-99 03:22 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, this is definitly your best sonnet ever! I had tears in my eyes reading it... Your hard work and effort, I know, are in there, but you make it seem so easy! I must be the luckiest gal in the forum to have your attention! Thank you...

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

JennyLee
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3 posted 09-13-99 05:23 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Love surpasses my every written word!!
You have a style that is unsurpassed !!
I love to read your work...

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Helewes
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4 posted 09-13-99 05:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Dream, you never cease to amaze me you know Love surpasses my every written word,WOW
I love it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Elizabeth
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5 posted 09-13-99 06:06 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

It says so much. Another enjoyable read, DreamEvil-this was just gorgeous.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

caroline
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6 posted 09-13-99 06:58 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

your very best, my friend.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Saxoness
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7 posted 09-13-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

this was beautiful dream, so tender.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Poet deVine
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8 posted 09-13-99 09:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent! Perhaps you should put together a book of just your sonnets..seems you can write these as well or better than your other styles....
DreamEvil
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9 posted 09-14-99 10:39 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you all very much. Lady deVine, if I get a few more requests like yours I will do so.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


Justbleu
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10 posted 09-14-99 10:23 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Very pretty!!!

Thanks

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
caroline
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11 posted 09-14-99 10:38 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Please add my request

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Denise
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12 posted 09-14-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So truly romantic!

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Denise
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