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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-13-99 11:34 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Lovers Crown

Walking along this country side
The warm wind through my hair
I've come from far and wide
To end this love affair.
I take you for a stroll
Through these evergreen fields
I pour out, my heart and soul
Only wanting to be healed.

Your hand in mine, a tear drops down
As I resign the lovers crown.


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-13-99).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 09-13-99 01:00 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Girl, this is sad, but yet very beautiful!

I know how you must feel!!! ((((HUGS))))
DreamEvil
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2 posted 09-13-99 01:33 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Soul-sister, I feel for you and with you. (hugs)

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvilŠ




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HCwildchild
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3 posted 09-13-99 03:11 PM       View Profile for HCwildchild   Email HCwildchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HCwildchild

That was beautiful You have such talent! Keep up the good work

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Heather C.
JennyLee
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4 posted 09-13-99 05:18 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

This is so beautiful and sad.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 09-13-99 05:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, thank you for your lovely comment and thank you for listening

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dark Angel
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6 posted 09-13-99 05:23 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Dream,Thank you so much for everything

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dark Angel
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7 posted 09-13-99 05:24 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

HC and JennyLee, I thank you both for your lovley comments

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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8 posted 09-13-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hey D.A. any time! Hope things look up for ya soon Hon!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 09-14-99 09:10 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely written Dark angel.

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson
Dark Angel
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10 posted 09-14-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

hoot, Thank you so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Isis
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11 posted 09-14-99 06:25 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautifully written and so sad. I hate goodbyes..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Dark Angel
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12 posted 09-16-99 02:21 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Isis, I hate goodbye's too, Thank you

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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