Seymour - if I'm not mistaken, Floyd says you better move your ass real quick - lol. I really liked this poem. I can easily see the bar, the mirror behind the bar, the dim atmosphere, and the lonely man sitting at the bar trying to forget. You really nailed this one.
Sy! What are you doing? (Great poem by the way)..get out there and board up your windows....batten down your hatches...hunker down in the basement (do you have one of those?)...stock up on the essentials - Hershey bars and Vodka! Take care of yourself, I've heard Floyd is meaner than Andrew was!