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DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
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providence,ky.42450

0 posted 1999-09-13 09:51 AM



I have never seen a mountain top,
Or an ocean bright and blue.
I have never felt cool rain drops,
Or laid my eyes on you.
I have never seen a snow white dove,
Or leaves fall from the trees.
I have never had a chance to love,
Or to grow and play,or be.

I have never known the hurt you feel,
Or the pain thats there to stay.
I have never had my heart to heal,
It will never go away.

When I look up to the stars and say I love you,in a whisper.
I wish you well,and hope you know,this comes from little sister.


(For my sister Stephanie)

Love,Dara Beth

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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Arkansas
1 posted 1999-09-14 09:08 AM


Positively beautiful - I hope she's had the pleasure of reading this....I can't believe you didn't get any responses, so I'm kicking it back to the top!! Keep writing !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 110
providence,ky.42450
2 posted 1999-09-14 09:15 AM


Thank you Poet! My sister died when she was a baby.I never had a chance to tell her how I felt about her.I would have gladly taken her place.Babies are so precious,ya know?
Thanks again for your wonderful comments,very much appreciated!


DBeth

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DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 110
providence,ky.42450
3 posted 1999-09-14 02:33 PM


What? No more comments?
he-he-he-he-he!!!!(smile!)

DBeth

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-09-14 03:50 PM


DBeth,
It's a good poem and I too don't know why the poor responce, so with this we'll kick it up to the top again.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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5 posted 1999-09-14 07:37 PM


Very lovely, indeed, DBeth! I'm sure she's smiling down on you!!

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Denise

caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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6 posted 1999-09-14 09:55 PM


'Tis lovely, DBeth...precious thoughts of your sister.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

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