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Balladeer
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0 posted 1999-09-13 08:14 AM


It's 5 a.m. and here I am out standing in the rain.
It makes me shutter at the news of mister hurricane.
There's food to get and candles and those batteries, of course
And other little odds and ends to help survive the force.

The boat I'll fill with water lest it turn into a plane.
The hoses and the garbage cans, I must bring in - again.
Drinking water must be filled to help me stay alive,
Vienna sausages by the case will insure I survive.

Seymour's right there down the road. Pepper's right near, too
And I am sure that they are doing these same things I do.
It's a fact of life known to Floridians, one and all,
It's best to be prepared when Mother Nature comes to call.

Fred Hobbs is watching from upstate. Caroline's out there, too.
I wish them all the best and hope that they all make it through.
It seems that Mother Nature never likes to skip a chance
At showing little folks like us, our insignifigance.

So it's off to batten hatches, time to tie possessions down
And, when old Floyd has passed, we'll have to see what's still around.
It's just an inconvenience....just a small calamity
But I've survived Toerag and Suthern - how much worse can this one be?

© Copyright 1999 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 1999-09-13 08:57 AM


Oh Balladeer, still such a sense of humor!
I see it on the news, and hope all the best for you guys! We are but specks up against a hurricane. You all will be in my prayers, may God keep each one of you safe!!!!!!

Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-09-13 09:43 AM


I hear this 'Floyd' character will be there sometime today...you all take care of yourselves. Turn off the computer, hide under the bed! Stay safe! And when it's over and before you do anything else, let us know you're ok!
Lucie
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Houston
3 posted 1999-09-13 09:48 AM


If you should be picked up and carried 'cross the coast.
Remember you are welcome at my House, I'll be the host.
Houston is my city and we get plenty of sun.
Just remember if your coming don't forget to bring your gun.


Be safe sweet Balladeer, cause now that I picked on Toe, I don't wanna have to face him alone..hehe

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-09-13 09:51 AM


I too add my hopes that you will all be kept safe from harm..

HUGS all

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 1999-09-13 09:52 AM


Yeah, I'm with you 'deer ! I saw it on the news too, and immediately wondered if you were still on the map!!?? I'm thinking of you - HANG ON and come back to us ASAP so we'll stop worrying about you! Don't be flying around out in your boat, now!! Take cover, and take the dog!! Buy extra Alpo ??

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Toerag
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6 posted 1999-09-13 10:24 AM


It's just a small breeze?
You'll handle with ease
But I want ya to know,
You'll be in the prayers of old Toe..

I'll save ya some fruit,
It's got vitamin "T"
Make ya strong as a brute,
Cuz it has my seeds!

Seriously though,
I pray it's not bad,
And get back here soon,
To pester Toerag!

Take care of yourself Balladeer and all the rest of ya on that east coast.....I've been through many down in Mississippi....You'll all be in my thoughts...........

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-09-13 10:32 AM


Balladeer,
Nice poem, I'll see you after it's over, I'm doing the same thing you are, lots of luck.

DBeth
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8 posted 1999-09-13 10:40 AM


Take care of yourself down there.(Ever thought about moving inland?) he-he-he!
Your in my thoughts!

Go to a shelter,Take plenty to eat.
Hurricane Floyd you surely will beat.Like everything else, he will come to pass.Then tell him we said to kiss our ??? (buts!)(he-he-he)


Chin up DBeth

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suthern
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9 posted 1999-09-13 11:27 AM



Take care, 'Deer one... and hurry back soon! Believe me, I can sympathize!

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-13-99).]

Sunshine
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10 posted 1999-09-13 11:31 AM


Hugs and prayers sent your way........
LngJhnAg
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11 posted 1999-09-13 11:51 AM


'Deer

Floyd knows what's good for him,
He'll not take on The 'Deer.
I predict Floyd will turn aside,
And the weather will be clear.

good luck, 'Deer (just in case your reputation hasn't drifted out to the Bermuda triangle yet).

Balladeer
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12 posted 1999-09-13 12:10 PM


WhtDove, Sunshine and Rainbow, thank you for your thoughts.
DeVine one...not supposed to hit till Wednesday and maybe something good will happen by then.
Lucie....thanks for the offer. Pistol or rifle, or both?
Femme, thanks for the thoughts. Many times, these things are tougher on animals that people.
DBeth, great poem! I'll tell him.
Seymour, please understand if I don't say "drop over" for a few days!
Toe...Thanks for the vitamin T offer but Halloween's getting close and I know you need your pumpkin. Don't worry, I'll be back. There are some vicious people here and I know ya need my protection .
Suthern..I now see you for what you are...and I love every bit of it. Thank you for your concern. I will use all hot air at my disposal which, I agree, is considerable.


Balladeer
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13 posted 1999-09-13 12:13 PM


LongJohn, from your mouth to God's ear. Thank you, friend.
suthern
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14 posted 1999-09-13 12:15 PM


Oooops... you were only supposed to see the kinder, gentler version... *G*
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15 posted 1999-09-13 01:27 PM


You take care. I'm already praying for you and your loved ones.
Pepper
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16 posted 1999-09-13 01:59 PM


Sir: love the poem.....Good luck to you and Sy too......talk to you when this is all over.........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Nicole
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Florida
17 posted 1999-09-13 02:59 PM


Take care sweet 'Deer..and everyone else o'er there too. My roots are in Florida, and you all are in my thoughts along with my family down there. Be safe, and hold tight!
Justbleu
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18 posted 1999-09-15 02:27 AM


Bless you and everyone else there!!
Thanks for the lovely writing!!

*BACK TO THE TOP WITH YA*

Justbleu

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Dark Angel
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19 posted 1999-09-15 03:07 AM


Balladeer, Take care my friend,praying for you and your family

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Samuel Coleridge



caroline
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20 posted 1999-09-15 05:45 AM


So far so good here 'Deer one! I'm off to work this morning, and I'll be thinking of you and Sy and Pepper...Hugs!

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miriam
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21 posted 1999-09-15 05:56 PM


R U still alive!! I think I read this poem a little too late. My brother is in bootcamp in Georgia and I heard something about it heading that way. As soon as I see another poem posted by you I'll know you're okay.
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22 posted 1999-09-15 06:12 PM


I've been thinking of you lately, 'Deer one! May God bless you and everyone else down in the area.

Sending BIG hugs (and a lot of prayers) down Florida way! Love ya guys!

Love always,

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Nan
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23 posted 1999-09-15 06:42 PM


My Deer - I know you'd love to shower me with gifts - but you needn't send me such a tumultous one.....
Pepper
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24 posted 1999-09-15 06:52 PM


to let you all know.....Floyd missed us completely......thank you for all your good wishes and prayers....they seem to have worked

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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25 posted 2011-02-20 04:20 PM


I can see it now --- wait, I'll pack the spam as soon as I write out this one last poem. And isn't that "shuDDer", dear friend?  Spelling doesn't count when writing poetry in a hurricane.

You never fail to make me smile.

Alison

Balladeer
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26 posted 2011-02-20 08:10 PM


Ah,dear Alison..correcting the teacher, are we? I see my subtlety and double entendre was lost on you. A shutter is a very important weapon in a hurricane. When I say "I shutter.." I am using a play on words...shutter/shudder.

I accept your apology  

Alison
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27 posted 2011-02-20 08:50 PM


I knew that, yep.   I did.  Good play on words.  Ummm hmmm.  Love the poem ... and the misspelled workd that is not misspelled!



PS ... I would never correct my teacher.  Nope, not me.

Balladeer
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28 posted 2011-02-20 09:07 PM



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