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DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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0 posted 09-13-99 04:05 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Though we've only met
once my dear,
I want to make
perfectly clear
my intentions.
I really
can only say
that soon perhaps
one day,
you'll enjoy
my attentions.

Until there comes
such a time,
I fear
I'll be writing
my rhyme
inclusively
for you.

To your ears
from my lips
will meander
and trip
words
that paint
me anew.

Should one day
you truly desire
more
than the passionless fire
he brings,
then I would count
as a pleasure
your bountiful
treasured offerings.

About them,
you know
I've heard
many a word,
but counted
as absurd
the measure
of your ability.
Before I even
decided to start
I decided
the rumors
were part
of a very sad trend
to senility.

©1999 DreamEvil



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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


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~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


1 posted 09-13-99 04:11 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Wow... How did I get so lucky to know you? hehehe My favorite part of this is "to your ears from my lips/will meander and trip/words that paint me anew..." I love that part... Thank you so much!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

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JennyLee
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since 09-01-99
Posts 1478
Northwestern, NJ.


2 posted 09-13-99 09:56 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

"Should one day you truly desire more"
Thats my favorite line!!
I relate so to this....
More!!!!

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Helewes
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


3 posted 09-13-99 10:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
Your a devil of a poet. I enjoy all your things. Keep writing and stay well.
Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 08-02-99
Posts 9130
Purgatorial Incarceration


4 posted 09-13-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Now this I like, you should "muse" more often...
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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Sunny Queensland


5 posted 09-14-99 02:30 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Well done, keep them coming!!!:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


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