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Alleviation

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~one voice~
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0 posted 09-13-99 03:11 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Smooth with water going down
Ironically takes o'er my crown
Inebriating parts of me
Slows me down, making me dizzy
Pushing sleep upon my brain
And taking over every vein
I fight with vigor, aimlessly
To keep from fading, tastelessly
Can't concentrate or focus in
On things that lie here deep within
But oh, it's sweet to feel so numb
Instead of terrified and dumb
And oh, it's sweet to sanctify
My body with this bottle dry
Oh, it's sweet to feel this way
Wish I could do this every day
For now, I'll screw the lid back on
Of Sweet, Sublime, Don Perignon

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-13-99 03:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I can think of many ways to alleviate many things. One in thing particular seems to be a sovereign remedy for most of what ails me. Care to guess what that is?

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
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~one voice~
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2 posted 09-13-99 03:44 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Uh..... hehehe *whispers into DreamEvil's ear* Am I right? LOL

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 09-13-99 03:48 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this is a good one one voice makes me lips dry
Lady Timberland
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4 posted 09-13-99 03:50 AM       View Profile for Lady Timberland   Email Lady Timberland   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Timberland

Completely true for parts of society today and well written. I myself do know about days like these in which I must dwindle down this lonely road.
~one voice~
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5 posted 09-13-99 05:20 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you all for your praises! I actually wrote this while nursing a cold, intoxicated by TheraFlu (good stuff ain't it?) and I just figured a bottle of wine sounded much more dramatic than TheraFlu. Don't cha think? hehehe

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

JennyLee
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6 posted 09-13-99 09:47 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

So glad the Thera-flu inspired this !!
Really made me want to read it over and over.
Thanks for sharing your Talent!!

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Helewes

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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 09-13-99 10:54 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

one voice,
Good job enjoyed the read, wish you the best of good health. Which remainds me I just wrote one on drinking, I'll put it on. *L*
Paul Allen Lupien
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8 posted 09-13-99 11:30 AM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

Highly amusing and very nicely crafted.Quite a hoot!

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~one voice~
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9 posted 09-13-99 02:17 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanks to all of yaz!

Seymour: Thanks... I'm getting better slowly but surely... Doesn't it seem like the older you get, the harder it is to kick a cold?

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

Nicole
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10 posted 09-13-99 02:41 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

hehehe...girl! And here I'm sittin, inebriated on my own cup 'o thera flu...and you're right..a bottle of wine does sound more..hmmm...poetic (hehehe) but in the state I'm in now, it would all taste the same.

Hopes ya feel better soon!
~one voice~
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11 posted 09-13-99 03:35 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanks Satiate! I hope you feel better soon as well!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

 
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